Duy:The movie cited scientific knowledge, the relevant materials were analyzed and collate rich movie content, clarity, structural integrity, end of the article is very rich.
Kee:The movie program in general, the middle can add some images and text, the film becomes more holistic.
Jinhua:Movie format very accurate, the middle can add some color, some of the conditioning becomes clearer.
Inayat:May be suitably helped trim some of the parts of speech, highlighting the important part of the movie, the individual parts of the movie art.
Nogc;Beginning of the film is very comprehensive, the middle part is also perfect, a good clip this section, containing the expertise movie.
Peiqing:The first page can add some content, with a clear theme and topic clear, we need to do some modifications.
Joseph:Overall okay movie, you can make some appropriate adjustments in the middle,Highlight the main part.
Ranfy;Start and end missing part of the rationalization of intermediate comparison, some modifications are needed.
Tam;Format movies can make some different changes to improve the film side to better show up, become more standardized.
